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August 4th, 2007
Question: What to write/ What people like to read?
I have writtin a couple of articles that got no hist so , I want to know what people to tell me want to read or topics that get hits.
Here are my few articleshttp://www.cinemaroll.com/Cinemarolling/Top-10-Movies-of-2007.473719
http://www.quazen.com/Kids-and-Teens/School-Time/Mad-About-Math.466179
http://www.authspot.com/Biographies/Memories-of-my-Old-Country.449499
http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Fast-Life.466799
please also tell me how you liked this?
Answer: Well, "There Will Be Blood, is not about a women first period" put me off immediately. Not only for failing grammar but for poor taste. For the record. No one wants to hear about periods. Boys are grossed out by them, girls are annoyed by them. It's just rarely funny, and not at all in this case.
Also, humor works in movie reviews, but it's largely a 'bad review' focus. If a movie was bad, you want to rip into it, but not in a way that makes little babies cry, so you try and round it off with a 'this movie was so bad I renounced god" kind of thing. If a movie is good you don't really need to make jokes. You talk about why the movie was good...
That was another issue I had a problem with, your list/set of reviews weren't interesting. "I like this movie because it was really good" does not a good read, make. Why did you like it? Was the script good? Did you feel like you were really involved in the characters? Did the movie just look really damn cool with effects and costumes? I don't care that you liked the movie because it was good, NO ONE cares that you liked it just cause.
The math article was eh, we've all made this argument when struggling through math class, it's over done. Maybe you don't need all that math, but it is a very valuble life skill to have the capability to learn new and difficult things, and it's also an excellent skill to at least understand how some things relate math-wise which is usually job related. Also, you're kind of ragging on teachers a little too hard, for a population of very low paid high stress individuals I feel like it's unwarranted agression. When you're a kid, sure, all teachers are monsters. When you grow up and realize several of them live to help young people grow and learn things, that they want to have an impact on the world and this is how they do it, well, you come off sounding kind of douche-y.
In the third article it's a more interesting topic, but you tend to spell things out that don't need spelling out.
"The school wasn't in very good shape. Windows broken, pieces of walls falling off." You don't have to say it was in bad shape, and then describe the bad shape, you could just say that windows were broken, pieces of the walls littered the ground. We'll get that it's in crummy shape as we don't expect windows to be all busted up.
"I got a couple things, I don't remember what. A ruler or maybe sharpener" If you don't remember what, you don't need to say what it might have been. And perhaps, if this story is so focused on memories, you could embellish a little saying that you got a new pink eraser and clutched it light a safety blanket.
I do like how you repeated the first paragraph at the end, but I felt like, maybe it didn't relate completely. Since you're talking about these spanning memories, but you really only talk about school, and your country a little. I feel like the paragraph would be a good start of a book that spans your entire life, but the school would just be one chapter.
And, I've never been one for poetry, so I feel like I can't really say anything helpful for your last entry.
As far as getting more hits, I'd make titles catchier maybe? Also it couldn't hurt to post them around forums letting people know that you have something that relates to the topic that you wrote. Of course you'd have to make sure that links were welcome, you can't just plug your stuff where ever and expect that people will be interested.
Write what you want to write, there's no reason to write for an audience until you have one. And even then, don't worry about it.
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